Aido Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Well I've been wanting to become a Pixel Artist for some time now, I guess I finally gained enough courage to start trying...I'm open to any criticism of what I need to work on so please go ahead..1st Hokage - Harashima2nd Hokage - Tobirama3rd Hokage - Hiruzen Shippuden Naruto Shippuden Naruto with a Chuunin Vest (One Day ^_^) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hei Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Will you know you got to start somewhere. Will you know get better and surpass EVERYONE!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Selkie Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Will? Is that your real name Aido? =O!! They're ok, imo. But then again, i'm no expert. Keep working on your skills and see if you can work on this game one day, that would be cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aido Posted July 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 No my real name is Zay if you ever heard Soul say it.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbles Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 HAAAWT SHEIT.'cept for the naruto ones. the hair could be better and the first one has a belly? also, that chuunin vest is disproportional and...uhhuhhhnaruto's suit doesn't go well with chuunin vest. i guess he's gonna stay a genin forevuur Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 They look pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aido Posted July 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 @Bubbles I can't understand a word you say :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahmah Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Good looking Art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbles Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 uh... sorrygon try to write in understandable english you're doing good. just a few notes:-naruto's hair spikes are supposed to be kind of symmetrical.-his hair's shading needs some work... just try to do the same you did on 2nd hokage's hair.-it looks like naruto has a beer belly. you don't need that kind of thing in that area.-the chuunin vest looks way too big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aido Posted July 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Attempted to fix the Naruto based on the problems - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbles Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 looks bettah -try picturing his head as a circle and draw hair spikes on it. the way it's now looks more like a super sayan with the lateral spikes pointing upwards.-you made his beer belly straight. lol good. now try to get rid of it. in the 3/4 perspectve, the lower part of the base isn't supposed to be brighter than the upper part. brighter parts usually indicate something that is popping out. in this case, it's his belly. sorry for being an ass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aido Posted July 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Thanks for the advice Bubbles, I redid the hair completely made it more symmetrical and change my color pallet around the stomach. - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikey Reborn Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 I really like the Hokage ones , keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aido Posted July 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Made a new one with Sasuke Clothing but with hair that my character will have and a Sword I made just to see how I would do making a Custom Blade I call it Akuma no Tsubasa-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nassim Sr Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiOLD Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Those look great! Keep it up!!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aido Posted July 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Thanks Sushi ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Menos Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Great job keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seion Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 For beginners they're pretty good but from what I see you need to work on your neatness and just a little on your proportions, and shading also cause small details make all the difference. Also, on the chunnin Naruto sprite the sleeves look a tad off I'd go back and outline the red circles in black to fit the rest of the outlined look of the sprite and maybe add a second layer to naruto's hair instead of making it short. Um... I like where you were going with the second hokages hair but its a tad short to so might wanna clean that up. The first hokage's hair looks disproportionate to the rest of his head, kind of like a too tight baseball cap so I'd fix that and show a little hair revealing from his sides to show how long it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuo Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 good job i really liked the sword! you should try doing more of those! maybe final fantasy style swords?good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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